We are learning how to write to describe things well. The teachers gave us a picture of an old man and asked us to write to tell us what he looks like. They hoped we would use lots of adjectives, adverbs, nouns about parts of his face and maybe some similes or metaphors. Here is my work.
Kia ora Corrin
ReplyDeleteYou have chosen some good adjectives to describe this image. Maybe next time think about using different adjectives, rather than only colours. I like the word puffy, it makes me think of a cloud.